Improving the Introduction

I tried to improve the introduction below to make it sound more exciting and convincing for the audience. I hope you`ll like it!☺

ORIGINAL INTRODUCTION
The main Britain`s tourist attraction is London. It is the city of cathedrals and churches. But what about art? Do you know that three of the top ten museums and galleries in the world are in London? They are: The British Museum, Tate Modern and The National Gallery. And now I`d like to tell you some interesting facts about these places. 

MY VERSION OF INTRODUCTION

"Art is vital for the soul of the country". Words of wisdom by Alice Thomson. If you want to understand the English soul, the soul of a true Londoner, never miss a chance to visit London`s museums and galleries. Just imagine: three London`s museums - the British Museum, Tate Modern and the National Gallery - are in the world`s top ten. They are no ordinary places: true masterpieces, unique exhibits, priceless collections... Everything you need to make your trip to London unforgettable!  In my talk I`ll help you to get a glimpse of the most famous London`s museums.